I enjoyed this one. It has an oriental touch. I could also substitute "ricecake" (very common here in the Philippines) for "mooncake". The latter is also very common particularly during the Chinese New Year.
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in this world
we walk on the roof of hell,
gazing at flowers. - kobayashi issa
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A lovely moon series dustin...this one particularly I feel for my son
nice nice!
john
You have a wondrous way with words! Keep at it! c",)
I enjoyed this one. It has an oriental touch. I could also substitute "ricecake" (very common here in the Philippines) for "mooncake". The latter is also very common particularly during the Chinese New Year.
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