Saturday, September 16, 2006

white petals
fall upon the cracked
concrete
as i question the pale
scars across her wrists

4 Comments:

Blogger texas haijin said...

oh, a little tanka?

5:57 PM  
Blogger Aurora said...

This is a good one, Dustin.

6:43 PM  
Blogger its_baxter said...

i like the coloring

4:52 PM  
Blogger polona said...

i love this tanka!

2:45 PM  

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