Friday, August 11, 2006

sunlit window
her tattooed arm
in the pathos ivy

6 Comments:

Blogger texas haijin said...

this is a revision of an old poem i wrote about a year ago. the original was "her arm / an art show / cheap tattoos." from this revision, i can see how much i've grown. i went back and looked at my old file of haiku today. i laughed at some of the haiku. i'm glad i hung on to the old work.

7:04 PM  
Blogger Tim S said...

I really enjoyed this: Great imagery! Good job revising.

11:24 PM  
Blogger samuru999 said...

Thanks for visiting my blog!
Good poem here!

1:53 PM  
Blogger its_baxter said...

i love the revison.

2:16 PM  
Blogger polona said...

good one!
i enjoyed listening to you reading your haiku. looking forward to more :)

1:22 PM  
Blogger texas haijin said...

revised.

2:50 PM  

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