Sunday, August 20, 2006

my thoughts
somewhere in the wind—
—dandelion . . .
you and i always come back
after we drift away!

5 Comments:

Blogger whitney said...

hmm, I like the sound of this one.

9:59 PM  
Blogger Aurora said...

I like this one a lot, Dustin!

One small suggestion: what about putting an ellipsis after "dandelion" to connote drifting?

Well done.:)

6:06 AM  
Blogger Natalia L. Rudychev said...

What a beautiful tanka!
I love the pivot.

11:51 AM  
Blogger polona said...

beautiful!

1:45 PM  
Blogger its_baxter said...

a good thing. you're very blessed, Dustin

9:18 PM  

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