Monday, August 14, 2006

his wedding ring
in the car's ashtray—
crescent moon

4 Comments:

Blogger forgotten somebody said...

i'm glad that you somehow found my blog, because i was then able to read your work. this is a beautiful haiku,
i love the contrast between the importance of a wedding ring, and the not flattering position of the ashtray.

1:24 PM  
Blogger polona said...

i love this one!

1:30 PM  
Blogger whitney said...

This one makes me sad.

5:16 PM  
Blogger floots said...

so much poignancy

11:58 PM  

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