Friday, July 07, 2006

summer puddles after the rain claim the shoreline

10 Comments:

Blogger Masago said...

Of these three one-lines, I really like this one. Well done!

6:13 PM  
Blogger Tikkis said...

seabreeze
dashes rain
against springling can

12:02 PM  
Blogger polona said...

fine one-liners, dustin!
i guess this one is my favourite, too.

12:55 PM  
Blogger whitney said...

lovely image.

5:05 PM  
Blogger Jon Cox said...

Pretty! :o)

10:19 AM  
Blogger Frank Zappai said...

summer poodles -
after a beeline
drain their veins

7:28 PM  
Blogger J. Andrew Lockhart said...

nicely said

7:23 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

A sentence-ku, dustin. How do you feel about that?

10:04 AM  
Blogger its_baxter said...

my summer puddles claim the treeline :)

9:30 PM  
Blogger whitney said...

is it time for you to start sharing your writing again?

10:03 PM  

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