Thursday, July 06, 2006

shaky fawn—white spots shimmering this starry night

2 Comments:

Blogger Borut said...

Beautiful, poetic! Interesting, the way of writing down the haiku in a single line. As far as I know this was the way they were written by Japanese masters who used rhythm to achieve the division achived by Westerners by means of three lines. I've been thinking of using this approach, at least for a while, as an experiment etc. myself?:))

10:43 AM  
Blogger Shane said...

nice one

10:12 PM  

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