Tuesday, May 09, 2006

littered ditch—
the buzzard's beak deepens
into the rodent

4 Comments:

Blogger whitney said...

I can almost smell it.
Gross.

10:40 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Stark and effective, dustin

10:06 AM  
Blogger robert wilson said...

powerful and ethereal, dustin.

11:17 PM  
Blogger Alan Summers said...

Love it!

Haiku aren't supposed to be pretty all the time, otherwise we'd never appreciate them. (-;

Well observed, lightly written haiku.

I love all the comments, especially whitney's! (-;

But I also like Robert's "powerful and ethereal", that's a really interesting combination, and one I'll keep as a guide to my own writings.

1:45 PM  

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