Sunday, May 28, 2006

gun barrel
in the child's mouth—
toy aisle

3 Comments:

Blogger whitney said...

This one caught me very off guard.
Wow.

7:50 PM  
Blogger Alan Summers said...

Hi Dustin,

I kinda like this one, but the last line seems a bit too abrupt. It's very close to your classic Memorial Day gun haiku though!

I think we may have the Michael Moore of gun haiku here. Look forward to more, and it's okay, you can be Charlton Heston too. (-; He's still one of my movie heroes.

1:37 PM  
Blogger Shane said...

heh heh

7:47 PM  

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