Saturday, May 06, 2006

first summer rain
spring drains slowly
into the ditch

6 Comments:

Blogger Aurora said...

Nicely done.

5:51 AM  
Blogger Melanie Alberts said...

very nice...this ku gave me an idea for the monthly kukai. Thanks!

7:48 AM  
Blogger Shane said...

waita second - what happened to Spring? lol

2:36 PM  
Blogger Natalia L. Rudychev said...

Wonderful piece!

12:03 PM  
Blogger T.A.T. said...

enjoyed.

6:02 AM  
Blogger robert wilson said...

A haiku that shows respect for for the genre, Dustin; and its Japanese heritage.

11:36 PM  

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