Monday, March 27, 2006

storm clouds—
grandpa sits by the window
breath stirs the dust

4 Comments:

Blogger its_baxter said...

i took a breath when i read the end. i'm just weird.

4:35 PM  
Blogger J. Andrew Lockhart said...

I really like the image --

9:38 PM  
Blogger Beth said...

good one dustin! i like the image of dust being stirred up by an old man's breath. so quiet and gentle.

12:43 PM  
Blogger Pat Paulk said...

I like the image of an "old man's dust" being stirred by a storm! Good one Dustin!!

4:18 AM  

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