Tuesday, March 21, 2006

the school bus
slowly passing the house
cold morning
the heat of a cherry
from a stolen cigarette

3 Comments:

Blogger Aurora said...

I see your tanka have pivots - most impressive. And the way you've got the breaths paused here, very well rendered.

8:27 AM  
Blogger J. Andrew Lockhart said...

really good one --

10:32 AM  
Blogger whitney said...

i agree.

11:23 AM  

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