Wednesday, March 15, 2006

the mechanic's hand
so smooth in mine—
evening prayer

8 Comments:

Blogger whitney said...

this one is lovely.

6:51 PM  
Blogger its_baxter said...

love it

6:46 AM  
Blogger mattm said...

a subtle moment, well observed

8:21 AM  
Blogger Aurora said...

^^ Ditto what Matt said.

10:44 AM  
Blogger polona said...

nice :)

12:34 PM  
Blogger Eric Dutton said...

This is one of those observations that, once you've read the poem, you wonder why it hasn't been written about before. It feels like a poem that's been waiting a long time for someone to write it. Thanks for setting it free.

12:01 AM  
Blogger Pat Paulk said...

Very good!!

4:28 AM  
Blogger Denis said...

The unexpected gives it depth. Very nice indeed.

4:55 PM  

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