Saturday, March 18, 2006

in a hearse windshield— passing clouds

7 Comments:

Blogger texas haijin said...

this is a one line haiku inspired by denis garrison's one line haiku from his new personal haiku web site, flyingfishes.net, a site you should check out.

7:26 AM  
Blogger Aurora said...

This one is really well done.

Agree with you regarding Denis Garrison's site, his work is amazing.

8:12 AM  
Blogger Eric said...

excellent.

9:01 AM  
Blogger its_baxter said...

the words make us see what you see. a distinct image.

10:58 AM  
Blogger polona said...

i really like this.

1:36 PM  
Blogger Shane said...

vivid - flashes me back to my grandmother's passing

2:10 PM  
Blogger Pat Paulk said...

So much "passing" in one line!

1:14 PM  

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