Thursday, March 09, 2006

first spring thunderstorm—
Shostakovich seeps
into my bedsheets

6 Comments:

Blogger texas haijin said...

this is wordy compared to most my haiku.

9:45 AM  
Blogger polona said...

wordy or not - i like it!

1:03 PM  
Blogger J. Andrew Lockhart said...

magnificent!

3:10 PM  
Blogger texas haijin said...

i edited this haiku.

6:41 PM  
Blogger Shane said...

excellent

10:27 PM  
Blogger Aurora said...

I really like this one.

2:58 PM  

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