Saturday, March 04, 2006

after prayer
still praying over our meal . . .
the fly

8 Comments:

Blogger J. Andrew Lockhart said...

:)

8:41 PM  
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8:41 PM  
Blogger Eric Dutton said...

This is perfect.
One could fill an anthology with fly poems. They often seem to show up in important ways.

11:33 PM  
Blogger Pat Paulk said...

Very good Dustin!

12:10 AM  
Blogger polona said...

this sounds so Issa-like. love it!

10:23 AM  
Blogger its_baxter said...

just as long as he stays away from your "hunny buuun"

12:24 PM  
Blogger Borut said...

As usual. No satori after reading this one. But rewarding in the sense of reminding me of two things. Of a belief that in the speech of all living beings on earth, with the exception of the ass, there is continual praise of their creator. And of a story. In this the frightened passengers of a ship start to pray fervently because of a terrible storm. After some time, the captain reminds them: ‘O people, don’t lose heart, persevere a bit longer, I think I see land…

2:09 PM  
Blogger Shane said...

nice fly-ku

7:49 PM  

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