Wednesday, February 15, 2006

full moon . . .
ripple after ripple
—until the debris

5 Comments:

Blogger Ayumi said...

This is a classical one. Good haiku.

9:34 PM  
Blogger Shane said...

great imagery

10:23 PM  
Blogger texas haijin said...

i hoped this haiku would be enough. i didn't want to show much more through this haiku due to feeling as if i'm telling rather than showing. i hope this haiku is able for even non-haiku-ists to understand.

5:27 AM  
Blogger polona said...

I love the image.
Thanks for dropping by at my blog.

6:24 AM  
Blogger dorcus said...

This image squeezed at my chest. You paint with your words as well as any master with his brush.

8:52 AM  

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