Tuesday, January 17, 2006

this heat
against the cold windowpane
my breath
forms a returning ghost
haunts pass like a fever

3 Comments:

Blogger Eric said...

since first reading this, the idea of a ghost in the winter windowpane, made visual by a child's breath, has been haunting my imagination . . .

5:48 AM  
Blogger Eric said...

kind of like something out 'the shining' . . .

5:49 AM  
Blogger its_baxter said...

this one, too. i like it. i'm just catching up on what i've missed and making lots of comments ;)

5:08 PM  

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