Sunday, January 15, 2006

leaves
in early winter wind
converse
lonely in the field
her back faces me

13 Comments:

Blogger J. Andrew Lockhart said...

I like this --- do more
Andrew

8:10 PM  
Blogger roh mih said...

Nice, dustin... so, what happens now to your haiku? :-)

8:40 PM  
Blogger Sandy said...

So very very nice and so very nice to have you back.

I may have to try my hand a tanka. ;)

I'll be checking in to see how you're coming along.

S

p.s. I don't think you're green...at all.

me

9:16 PM  
Blogger Eric said...

you may be green in years, but yours must be a very seasoned soul . . . how else could you make such beauty from pain?

5:27 AM  
Blogger Judy Kamilhor said...

Welcome back, Dustin! Thanks for visiting my blog. I put a link there to your tanka blog.

Your first tanka is beautiful. Keep moving.

kami

8:23 AM  
Blogger extraspecialbitter said...

dustin - welcome back!

8:54 AM  
Blogger mattm said...

hi dustin, consider yourself linked too...

11:10 AM  
Blogger dorcus said...

This is so very beautiful. I hope you will post more.

11:10 AM  
Blogger mattm said...

or even to!

11:11 AM  
Blogger Denis said...

Dustin,

Great! I have linked here from Haiku Unchained.

bw,
Denis

11:48 AM  
Blogger bigshoulders said...

great to see you're back, Dustin. it gives me the bug to try my hand at the tanka again.

8:55 PM  
Blogger Michael said...

Very nice work... This one has the ring of truth...

Mike

5:48 AM  
Blogger Ellen M Johns said...

Just lovely.

3:27 PM  

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