Friday, January 27, 2006

after
the funeral—
trampled flowers

4 Comments:

Blogger J. Andrew Lockhart said...

fits
Andrew

7:02 PM  
Blogger Eric Dutton said...

The first time I read this, I wanted the "trampled flowers" to be the first line, but after a few more readings I think it's perfect. Thanks again.

-Eric

P.S. May I link to you on my poem-a-day page?

10:56 PM  
Blogger texas haijin said...

sure. i plan to update my links soon.

9:46 AM  
Blogger bigshoulders said...

nice rhythm to this piece, dustin.
congratulations on your piece in Triptych Haiku 1.1 very nice.

kevin

6:51 PM  

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